Tuesday, January 22, 2013


Apiary 40

BY CAROL FROST
The humble sense of being alive   
under the towering sun   
fills the nectary and ripens apricots   
down to the last one,   
if Mnemosyne wakens from apathy   
each moment. It is the soft burly sound   
of a bee tumbled in fritillary,   
is it not?   
But if memory, as if to illustrate   
the mind was not yours to have,   
the mind was not given,   
fails us, leaving us in our underpants   
in the garden, should we not   
hate the garden,   
or the woman whose garden   
it is? And sunlight. Thunder.   
Rain. Hardened in heart against   
what earth compels and seizes,   
goddamning, goddamned rain.


I think the tone is bitterness.  The poem starts off very rhyme and organized  the first couple of lines, and then it becomes more chaotic, random. like something bad happened.  I think it is about god casting us from Eden  leaving us vulnerable "in our underpants" casts a very vulnerable image. you can also take "goddamning rain: much more literally, god damning us from Eden.

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